Black and white version : I think it makes a comic look cool and really detailed which makes it look like a good manga page. The details in backgrounds are really good and they are reflecting the comic really well. I have missed one speech bubble of one of the zombies. The SFX(sound effects) could have been done a lot better for the fonts. I had used the desiderata tool in Photoshop which has been changed into black and white .
Colour: It shows a differnet emotion from the other 2 pages. The colour of the sky could have been done a lot better as it looks more like a sea then a sky. The green part in the sky is supposed to be rocks which should been same colour as the wall colour.The blending tool should have made it a lot better. I have really improved on my last comic.
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